Paper 2 correction

Section A

Article

                                               Effect of technologies over our lives performance.

The new technologies have affected our day a day life.

28th April of 2016

Have you seen the new technologies that our children use?

We all know that our society is changing and we are changing too,just like this we have changed our way of study or to practice our favorite sport.

The technology used in the present has pros and cons, this is because when studying you can use the technology to make your learning faster, or to have items via internet. The problem with this is that almost all of the people that use this media to learn usually finish playing or just not paying attention.

In other cases this can become in wealthy problems because of the sedentarism this way to study develop in humans.

Talking about sports there seems to be the same. Nowadays we can see how the technology can improve the sports, for example in terms of rugby, we can use the technology to rate our performance with  a little artifact on our back when playing , or to watch new techniques in the internet, so as you can see there are a lot of ways to improve our sport performance with the technology.

On the other hand we have the problem, we usually stop doing sports because of the technology, for example we want to go running, but we are playing a video game, so we stay playing and we don't go out to run, there is where technology affects our sport performance.

Just how the great economist Kaynes said, "The technology is our final start", this explains how the technology will help our progress, but the society will destroy with the passing years.

In conclusion, we asume that the new technologies have changed our society in favor. but if our society makes bad use of it, it will affect our learning and sport performance as a solution of this weakness we must teach and improve the good use of these new technologies.

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Section B                                         Diary entry

                                                                                                         Thursday 28th of April 1975

Today I went to the speech of Jim Morrison were he talked about "whoever controls the media, controls the mind", he talked about how someone that we don't know, can control us via the social media. I think he is totally correct because when someone posts something offensive in Facebook it can affect our lives only because he used the social media, another example, if the creator of Facebook or any social media, closes that page, most of the people will be affected because for a lot of people the social media is they life, so they would feel bad for losing their social life. Another important example he mentioned in the speech is that in the media , a lot of information is going around, and we all believe this is true. This is another reason that "whoever controls te media , controls the mind" because someone can give wrong information in the media and this information spread all over the world, and it can be a tragedy , this can affect our lives, our minds and everybody's life, being this information wrong or false.

In conclusion, we can see between all the examples how the media can control our minds, and the one that controls it must do it in the right way so he benefits the society and doesn't affect negatively our development of life.

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Paper 2 correction

Section A

Article

                                               Efect of tecnologies over our lifes performance.

the new tecnologies have affected our day a day life.

28th April of 2016

Have you seen the new technologies that our children use?

We all know that our society is changing and we are changing too,just like this we have changed our way of study or to practice our favorite sport.

The technology used in the present has pros and cons, this is because when studying you can use the technology to make your learning faster, or to have items via internet. The problem with this is that almost all of the people that use this media to learn usually finish playing or just not paying atention.

In other cases this can become in wealthy problems because of the sedentarism this way to study develop in humans.

Talking about sports there seems to be the same. Nowadays we can see how the technology can improve the sports, for example in terms of rugby, we can use the technology to rate our performance with  a little artifact on our back when playing , or to watch new techniques in the internet, so as you can see there are a lot of ways to improve our sport performance with the technology.
On the other hand we have the problem, we usually stop doing sports because of the technology, for example we want to go running, but we are playing a videogame, so we stay playing and we dont go out to run, there is where technology affects our sport performance.

Just how the great economist kaynes said, "The technology is our final start", this explains how the technology will help our progress, but the society will destroy with the passing years.

In conclusion, we asume that the nes technologies have changed our society in favour. but if our society makes bad use of it, it will affect our learning and sport performance as a solution of this weakness we must teach and improve the good use of these new technologies.
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Section B                                         Diary entry
                                                                                                         Thursday 28th of April 1975
Today I went to the speech of Jim Morrison were he talked about "whoever controls the media, controls the mind", he talked about how someone that we dont know, can control us via the social media. I think he is totally correct because when someone posts something offensive in facebook it cann affect our lives only because he used the social media, another example, if the creator of facebook or any social media, closes that page, most of the people will be affected because for a lot of people yhe social media is they life, so they would feel bad for losing their social life. Another important example he mentioned in the speech is that in the media , a lot of information is going around, and we all bealive this is true. This is another reason that "whoever controls te media , controls the mind" because someone can give wrong information in the media and this information spread all over the world, and it can be a tragedy , this can affect our lives, our minds and everybodys life, being this information wrong or false.

In conclusion, we can see between all the examples how the media can control our minds, and the one that controls it must do it in the right way so he benefits the society and doesent affect negatively our development of life.
227 words
                  

Personal Response

                                                      Its google a good tool in our lives?

Backrub, known as Google now a  days is a world famous internet page, Where you can find everything that the human race has known. Google was founded 1995 With the name of BacRub and 3 years later was the famous searcher in the world.

The technology is progressing and in my opinion Google helps us to make this process, making our day a day easier and faster, this foams website is an important tool for everyone : students, teachers, parents, workers. But happens with the little kids?

One of the google problems is that everyone can search everything, this is a serious problem. I personally imagine a little kid in a computer searching inappriopate things on google, things that aren't appropriated for his age, things that their parents must teach when the years pass. The bad part of Google can be fixed by giving the parental control or something like that, to prevent the risks.

In conclusion Google is the perfect tool for busy people because of its fast and useful service that this page provides us with in our daily life. On the other hand we must take care of whet we search and what the little kids search.

Chapter 12 answers

1.-Soraya helps her friends so they can learn how to write and read.
2.-A timr when amir saw things he had never seen before.
3.-He had cancer in her lungs, but he didint want to treat this fatal desease.
4.-Beacause she was really direct and honest and she told him all his secrets

reservation tasks

An Indian reservation is a legal designation for an area of land managed by a Native American tribe under the US Bureau of Indian Affairs, rather than the state governments of the United States in which they are physically located. Each of the 326 Indian reservations in the United States are associated with a particular Nation. Not all of the country's 567 recognized tribes have a reservation, some tribes have more than one reservation, some share reservations, while others have none. In addition, because of past land allotments, leading to some sales to non-Indians, some reservations are severely fragmented, with each piece of tribal,individual, and privately held land being a separate enclave. This jumble of private and public real estate creates significant administrative, political, and legal difficulties.

Animal farm

Good morning, or should I say bad morning? Friends today I want to make you think about a heavy, very heavy problem, he is around 80kg and he drinks whiskey. The problem we have is our dictator, Napoleon. Does any of the present animals know what this horrible animal? If he is still an animal, because he drinks whiskey, use human’s cloths and he sleeps in a bed. This are not the good things he had made, if you think this is bad hear this, he killed animals , for example out big friend boxer who was supposedly going to see a medic, but the true is that he was sold by Napoleon to a glue factory, he spend the money in whiskey. Do you remember the wind mill?, all that food we collected was sold, that is why we were so hungry, all the money was obviously used to buy whiskey. If all this horrible things give me the right to be against Napoleon Do I have to mention that he changed the old major statements, for example old major said: "No animals should sleep in beds”, but he added “without sheets” so he sleeps now in a bed. All this made me think and we must make to Napoleon all the bad things he made to all of us, don’t let them eat, work hard, suffer, and finally die how our friend boxer did. All this will liberate our farm and we will be in the lead of snow ball who have a secret hours near or farm, he will lead us to a proper future, long live the animal farm!

Corrected writen assignement

Dear Rahim Khan,

 

 

I’m writing to you because I need to tell you something very important that happened to a very near friend from whom I have a lot of affection. I decided to tell you this awful event because I can’t stop thinking of it, so coming to America, I decided to tell this to someone, there is where you appear, I personally trust in you so I know you will keep this in secret between you and me.

 

 

This awful event happened the same day that Hassan and I made history winning the Kabul kite tournament. When I cut the last blue kite, Hassan start running that blue kite. After 2 hours he doesn’t come back with the kite, so I start to worry about him, so I make my way to searched for.

 

 

I asked to a Street seller about a Hazara boy with a blue kite, and he said to me that 3 boys were running behind him, in that moment I got scared and I felt resentment, so I started running. Finally I found Hassan in a Street with Assef and his friends, what I saw i there was something I had never seen, Assef was abusing of Hassan, and I saw all and I didint  helped him.

 

 

After that happened Hassan was much timid when he talked to me and I don’t like that, so I started to bother him, because I don’t feel comfortable knowing what happened to Hassan and I didint  help him. This is why in my party I hide my new watch under Hassan’s pillow, and I told my father were I found my watch. My father forgive the hazaras, but they went away because they felt guilty. They went  to Hazarayat after leaving our house, until they left I haven’t seen Hassan. After that I came to usa, so I need to know what happened to Hassan's life, this is the reason why I’m writing to you, because I’m worried about him, and I want to make sure he understands why I wanted to blame him when we were just kids. that was a very hard time in my childhood, after that event my life changed over, I was alone with no friends after Hassan and ali left Kabul , then the soviet soldiers invaded Kabul, me and Baba left Afghanistan and moved to usa. Here Baba worked in a very big gas station where he was in charge of the cash machine. In my case I’m finishing the school in a Little college in San Francisco near my apartment. Actually I’m very happy with my new life here, I met a attractive girl named Soraya, she love my stories. My stories had a big progress with the recommendation’s you gave me, so all is going well to me here, but I miss Kabul, all that precious time I passed in that lovely city, all that good and bad adventures with my best friend Hassan, all those kite tournaments we won with Hassan, and all the kites he run for me, I really miss Hassan and Kabul.

 

 

So all this can show you how much I need you to find Hassan and said what I had said you between this letters, I must thank you and I will wait for your answer.

 

 

Best regards

 

Amir.

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