Paper 2 correction

Section A

Article

                                               Effect of technologies over our lives performance.

The new technologies have affected our day a day life.

28th April of 2016

Have you seen the new technologies that our children use?

We all know that our society is changing and we are changing too,just like this we have changed our way of study or to practice our favorite sport.

The technology used in the present has pros and cons, this is because when studying you can use the technology to make your learning faster, or to have items via internet. The problem with this is that almost all of the people that use this media to learn usually finish playing or just not paying attention.

In other cases this can become in wealthy problems because of the sedentarism this way to study develop in humans.

Talking about sports there seems to be the same. Nowadays we can see how the technology can improve the sports, for example in terms of rugby, we can use the technology to rate our performance with  a little artifact on our back when playing , or to watch new techniques in the internet, so as you can see there are a lot of ways to improve our sport performance with the technology.

On the other hand we have the problem, we usually stop doing sports because of the technology, for example we want to go running, but we are playing a video game, so we stay playing and we don't go out to run, there is where technology affects our sport performance.

Just how the great economist Kaynes said, "The technology is our final start", this explains how the technology will help our progress, but the society will destroy with the passing years.

In conclusion, we asume that the new technologies have changed our society in favor. but if our society makes bad use of it, it will affect our learning and sport performance as a solution of this weakness we must teach and improve the good use of these new technologies.

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Section B                                         Diary entry

                                                                                                         Thursday 28th of April 1975

Today I went to the speech of Jim Morrison were he talked about "whoever controls the media, controls the mind", he talked about how someone that we don't know, can control us via the social media. I think he is totally correct because when someone posts something offensive in Facebook it can affect our lives only because he used the social media, another example, if the creator of Facebook or any social media, closes that page, most of the people will be affected because for a lot of people the social media is they life, so they would feel bad for losing their social life. Another important example he mentioned in the speech is that in the media , a lot of information is going around, and we all believe this is true. This is another reason that "whoever controls te media , controls the mind" because someone can give wrong information in the media and this information spread all over the world, and it can be a tragedy , this can affect our lives, our minds and everybody's life, being this information wrong or false.

In conclusion, we can see between all the examples how the media can control our minds, and the one that controls it must do it in the right way so he benefits the society and doesn't affect negatively our development of life.

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Paper 2 correction

Section A

Article

                                               Efect of tecnologies over our lifes performance.

the new tecnologies have affected our day a day life.

28th April of 2016

Have you seen the new technologies that our children use?

We all know that our society is changing and we are changing too,just like this we have changed our way of study or to practice our favorite sport.

The technology used in the present has pros and cons, this is because when studying you can use the technology to make your learning faster, or to have items via internet. The problem with this is that almost all of the people that use this media to learn usually finish playing or just not paying atention.

In other cases this can become in wealthy problems because of the sedentarism this way to study develop in humans.

Talking about sports there seems to be the same. Nowadays we can see how the technology can improve the sports, for example in terms of rugby, we can use the technology to rate our performance with  a little artifact on our back when playing , or to watch new techniques in the internet, so as you can see there are a lot of ways to improve our sport performance with the technology.
On the other hand we have the problem, we usually stop doing sports because of the technology, for example we want to go running, but we are playing a videogame, so we stay playing and we dont go out to run, there is where technology affects our sport performance.

Just how the great economist kaynes said, "The technology is our final start", this explains how the technology will help our progress, but the society will destroy with the passing years.

In conclusion, we asume that the nes technologies have changed our society in favour. but if our society makes bad use of it, it will affect our learning and sport performance as a solution of this weakness we must teach and improve the good use of these new technologies.
340 words


Section B                                         Diary entry
                                                                                                         Thursday 28th of April 1975
Today I went to the speech of Jim Morrison were he talked about "whoever controls the media, controls the mind", he talked about how someone that we dont know, can control us via the social media. I think he is totally correct because when someone posts something offensive in facebook it cann affect our lives only because he used the social media, another example, if the creator of facebook or any social media, closes that page, most of the people will be affected because for a lot of people yhe social media is they life, so they would feel bad for losing their social life. Another important example he mentioned in the speech is that in the media , a lot of information is going around, and we all bealive this is true. This is another reason that "whoever controls te media , controls the mind" because someone can give wrong information in the media and this information spread all over the world, and it can be a tragedy , this can affect our lives, our minds and everybodys life, being this information wrong or false.

In conclusion, we can see between all the examples how the media can control our minds, and the one that controls it must do it in the right way so he benefits the society and doesent affect negatively our development of life.
227 words
                  

Personal Response

                                                      Its google a good tool in our lives?

Backrub, known as Google now a  days is a world famous internet page, Where you can find everything that the human race has known. Google was founded 1995 With the name of BacRub and 3 years later was the famous searcher in the world.

The technology is progressing and in my opinion Google helps us to make this process, making our day a day easier and faster, this foams website is an important tool for everyone : students, teachers, parents, workers. But happens with the little kids?

One of the google problems is that everyone can search everything, this is a serious problem. I personally imagine a little kid in a computer searching inappriopate things on google, things that aren't appropriated for his age, things that their parents must teach when the years pass. The bad part of Google can be fixed by giving the parental control or something like that, to prevent the risks.

In conclusion Google is the perfect tool for busy people because of its fast and useful service that this page provides us with in our daily life. On the other hand we must take care of whet we search and what the little kids search.