Corrected writen assignement

Dear Rahim Khan,

 

 

I’m writing to you because I need to tell you something very important that happened to a very near friend from whom I have a lot of affection. I decided to tell you this awful event because I can’t stop thinking of it, so coming to America, I decided to tell this to someone, there is where you appear, I personally trust in you so I know you will keep this in secret between you and me.

 

 

This awful event happened the same day that Hassan and I made history winning the Kabul kite tournament. When I cut the last blue kite, Hassan start running that blue kite. After 2 hours he doesn’t come back with the kite, so I start to worry about him, so I make my way to searched for.

 

 

I asked to a Street seller about a Hazara boy with a blue kite, and he said to me that 3 boys were running behind him, in that moment I got scared and I felt resentment, so I started running. Finally I found Hassan in a Street with Assef and his friends, what I saw i there was something I had never seen, Assef was abusing of Hassan, and I saw all and I didint  helped him.

 

 

After that happened Hassan was much timid when he talked to me and I don’t like that, so I started to bother him, because I don’t feel comfortable knowing what happened to Hassan and I didint  help him. This is why in my party I hide my new watch under Hassan’s pillow, and I told my father were I found my watch. My father forgive the hazaras, but they went away because they felt guilty. They went  to Hazarayat after leaving our house, until they left I haven’t seen Hassan. After that I came to usa, so I need to know what happened to Hassan's life, this is the reason why I’m writing to you, because I’m worried about him, and I want to make sure he understands why I wanted to blame him when we were just kids. that was a very hard time in my childhood, after that event my life changed over, I was alone with no friends after Hassan and ali left Kabul , then the soviet soldiers invaded Kabul, me and Baba left Afghanistan and moved to usa. Here Baba worked in a very big gas station where he was in charge of the cash machine. In my case I’m finishing the school in a Little college in San Francisco near my apartment. Actually I’m very happy with my new life here, I met a attractive girl named Soraya, she love my stories. My stories had a big progress with the recommendation’s you gave me, so all is going well to me here, but I miss Kabul, all that precious time I passed in that lovely city, all that good and bad adventures with my best friend Hassan, all those kite tournaments we won with Hassan, and all the kites he run for me, I really miss Hassan and Kabul.

 

 

So all this can show you how much I need you to find Hassan and said what I had said you between this letters, I must thank you and I will wait for your answer.

 

 

Best regards

 

Amir.

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Corrected Rationale

The kite runner novel consists of a story that takes place in Afghanistan, were 2 boys, Amir and Hassan pass over a lot of funny and serious problems, this ends when the boys separate, and Amir moves to USA because of the soviet invasion in Afghanistan. Then they remember each other, but Hassan died and Amir goes to Afghanistan to get Hassan's son. My letter to Rahim Khan is related to the story because I include real secenes that happened in the book . My letter goals is to finish the book in other way, because if Rahim Khan tell this to Hassan is posible that he doesent die, and meet Amir. The goal will be reached by the stories that I include in the letter and the solution that I give of the problems that presents in the story. This will be a letter, to the people that had read the book, is a semi-formal register because is between 2 friends.

similarities between book and movie

In the movie we can see a lot of similarities I personally there is no general details the movie doesn’t have, one of the similarities I fond reliable is that Amir have a lot of remembers when he saw the Hassan’s son, he remember his Hassan. Other one is that the events are exactly in the same adore in the movie and in the book. The last one is the cloths that in the book are described, here the cloths are the same, when they describe the cloths that Hassan’s son wear when he dances are the same.

The differences that I found between the movie and the book are not big, the first one is that in the book said that Amir broke 7 bones when he fight with assef, but in the movie he can walk and pass over a Wall and he only got hurt an eye. In the book assfe said to Amir something like he helped the Taliban’s, but I don’t understand this part, but in the movie I don’t hear it. And in the movie we can see a more convinced Amir, I think what he said is very serious and in the book he is more like poor in language theme.