Trinity tasks correction

                                                             The new Allsop teacher
With the new teacher, Michael Wilson, the rules have changed a lot. When the teacher goes to class the students have to make a line to enter  the class, if they come with the wrong shoes he sends them home, they have to come with the school uniform, they can't go out to eat at a fast food places and if they don't complete their homework they have to stay after class. The new teacher has changed some things to make the school more beautiful and technological changes. The building now looks brand new and the students behaviour is better than before. This school in my opinion is very strict in appearance and apparent ways of punishment. If someone asked me if I would like to go to the school I would say yes, because I like the rules.
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6th task revision

How to plan the perfect party

Well today Im going to teach you how to throw a good party. To throw a good party you need to invite a lot of people because some people may not come, have food, things to drink, music and a big place to dance. Most of the parties are not succesful,  because they don't have much people or they don't have the best music or they don't give the correct information to the guests, that can cause a bad party or less people will go. I like all types of parties because in all types you can dance, enjoy, meet people and have fun with a lot of good friends.

Words: 110

5th task revision

                                        The best surprise party:

Last month I decided to organise a surprise party for my best friend Pedro Villanova, I decided to do it because I had time and I used the vacation time to do it. The only thing that I needed to throw it was my friends help, music and some food.

The party was exciting because we all had a good time, so the girls had a good time with Pedro and he got a lot of surprises and gifts. My friends congratulate me for the good party and all had a good time so some friends  said to me that it was the best party of this vacation.

Words: 108

4th task revision

Hi, Marta

I am writing to you because I heard that you want to be a television presenter,

I think that  would be an excelent idea because you have the perfect personality that most of the presenters have. For this job you will need to be very careful in what you say and what you say about other people. Well I am writing you because you could have a good tv presenter career.

Good luck 

Regards,

                Joaquin





Words: 77

3rd task revision

My trip to the south of Chile.

Last year I visited the south of Chile with all the 7th greaders of the Mackay. This place was very beautiful and it is a good idea to go there. It had a lot of Chilean culture. I met a lot of people like all the hotel receptionists and some people from the shops  and when we went to the "Jardin de Lota" I met a special kid named Francisca. She was a girl that I gave some gifts to and helped her with some things. I helped her because she didin't have much money to buy things.

Lota is very beautiful and if I have the opportunity, I will go again.


Words: 112

My common grammar mistakes y glossary

Name: Joaquin Nuñez                                  Date: Thursday 22nd, August,2013          Grade: 8th ISE-1


Mistake N1: `The only thing that I use is friends help`

Correction:´The onlynthing that I needs was friends help`

Rule: past tense.
Explanation of the of the grammar rule:http://en.allexperts.com/q/General-Writing-Grammar-680/need-vs-needs.htm

Need is plural; needs is singular.

Since the patient is singular, the verb must also be singular to agree

Examples: 

1-. When she needs help, we all help her`
2.-That was what i needs.

Links to practice:

1.-http://elt.oup.com/student/practicegrammar/basic/?cc=cl&selLanguage=en
2-.http://www.harcourtschool.com/menus/preview/harcourt_language/goforgold.html





Mistake N2: ´They have being 12 years together`
Correction: ´They had been 12 years together`

Rule : Grammar

Explanation of the grammar rule:http://www.grammar-monster.com/easily_confused/being_been.htm
Use been after the verb to have.

Use being after the verb to be.

 Example:
1.-We have been playing for 2 hours.
2.-We have been at USA.


links to practice:
1.-http://learnenglishkids.britishcouncil.org/es/grammar-games
2.-http://www.ellwood.goleta.k12.ca.us/GrammarGames/grammargames.html



Mistake N3:´I have visited Lota last year´

Correction:´I visited Lota last year´

Rule:Grammar

Explanation of the gramar rule:
http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/ask-teacher/154328-had-visited-visited.html

Actually, the present tense is used more for factual statements.

It has to be the past tense when the time in the past is specified.


Examples:
1.-´Yesterday I visited my grandfather´
2.-´He had just visited USA´


Links to correct:
1.- http://grammar.about.com/gi/o.htm?zi=1/XJ&zTi=1&sdn=grammar&cdn=education&tm=6&gps=122_9_1920_985&f=00&su=p284.13.342.ip_&tt=3&bt=8&bts=72&zu=http%3A//www.ucalgary.ca/UofC/eduweb/grammar/marking/alpha.htm
2.-http://grammar.about.com/gi/o.htm?zi=1/XJ&zTi=1&sdn=grammar&cdn=education&tm=56&gps=121_1_1920_985&f=00&su=p284.13.342.ip_&tt=3&bt=8&bts=72&zu=http%3A//owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/index.HTML


Mistake N4 :´The woman which work in the garden is from Brazil´.

Correction: ´The woman who work in the garden is from Brazil´.


Rule: gramar

Explanation of the gramar rule: http://www.grammarbook.com/grammar/whovwhvt.asp

Who refers to people. That and which refer to groups or things


Examples:
1.-´The men who Works there is very heplful´.
2.-´He is who help me yesterday´.

Link for excersise:
1.- http://grammar.about.com/gi/o.htm?zi=1/XJ&zTi=1&sdn=grammar&cdn=education&tm=5&gps=87_5_1920_985&f=00&su=p284.13.342.ip_&tt=3&bt=8&bts=72&zu=http%3A//bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/everyday_writer3e/20errors/default.asp


2.- http://grammar.about.com/gi/o.htm?zi=1/XJ&zTi=1&sdn=grammar&cdn=education&tm=28&gps=146_9_1920_985&f=00&su=p284.13.342.ip_&tt=3&bt=8&bts=72&zu=http%3A//www.aliscot.com/bigdog/


Mistakes N5 : ´I enjoyed it from the play´.

Correction: ´I enjoyed the play´.

Rule:  Pronoun

Explanation of the gramar rule : http://www.grammarbook.com/grammar/pronoun.asp


A pronoun is a word that takes the place of a noun. Pronouns can be in one of three cases: Subject, Object, or Possessive.

Subject pronouns are used when the pronoun is the subject of the sentence. You can remember subject pronouns easily by filling in the blank subject space for a simple sentence


Examples:
1.- ´ We enjoy the movie´
2.- ´´They have enjoy the movie´.

Links to practice:
1.-https://sites.google.com/site/easygrammar4kids/
2.- http://kidsactivities.about.com/od/ReadingandWriting/a/Web-Writing-For-Kids-Style-And-Grammar.htm